I would really like to know why you are in my book. Seriously, why?
I mean right now you are just some ego laden asshole from South Africa. What is the point of you being from South Africa? None that I can tell. You could be from Romania or Russia, or Japan, or even Nebraska.
You went from being the baddy to just some rather unfortunate misguided jerk on a power trip. You used to leer in my ear, and be oily, slime with legs. But all of that has shifted to some other guy, and you are in-fact being used.
You do get a great line though, its a pretty good line:
You really have no idea just how big my continent is, do you?
So, VH, from South Africa, please come back, whisper in my ear.
AND TELL ME WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH YOU???
My stuff is still out with Betas, or (in the case of one of them the editor squeek)
So no “reviews” yet.
But I am getting some epic complements:
“There is no sleep there is only Ares Martin”
said when I found out she had been up until 2 am reading! (Ares is the hero of that book.)
And then she told me she liked it so much she started reading it a second time!
Regarding an ending that needed revising: “Lu Lu Lu you nailed that ending. Absolutely f*cking nailed it.”
“So whens the next one?”
Im gonna keep on doing this!
Im working on figuring out this whole writing, self publishing, and marketing thing.
So this is the first blog post.
Its mostly empty, and extremely boring.
Im less boring over on Facebook:
and Ive great pins on Pintrest: